Misterious...
First composition? If this is your first, you really have a great destiny at composing, wow imagine all the beautiful pieces you can make in just one year.
This piece has such a misterious feeling to it, I'd love to know what inspired you to write this song. You know how hard is to play a piece that's almost 8 minutes long, it takes so much expertizing of the piece, and keeping your feelings flowing all the time, I admire you for that. About the message of the piece, it has a little sadness, but overall has a peaceful sensation, when you start hearing it, you just forget about everything, and disappear in time.
Why did I give it a 9? hehe, the piece itself is outstanding, but I found the notes pressing without hard or soft times, maybe it's the keyboard you're using, that deosn't have notes sensitivity, and takes a bit of the magic for the song, It would be so amazing to hear it with all of it playing changes of mood.
I love your work, I'll wait for new submissions from you, you have so much talent and future in music =)